Thursday, February 19

floats ahead





taking my poem
for a walk in the sunshine
it floats ahead

birds do the writing for me
while my head is on empty



© Girl Friday





the world brilliantly bathed
in a shaft of morning sun
makes my heart ache to go out
and leave my poem
to its own devices



© Girl Friday


Written for Jen at CarpeDiem

8 comments:

Janice said...

Terrific!

Blog It Or Lose It said...

Your muses are very kind to you then :)

Great take on the prompt :)

Jazzbumpa said...

a bit on the surreal side

send the birds my way when you're done with them

cheers
jzb

Unknown said...

Your offerings never cease to amaze me...so enjoyable to read and read:)

Unknown said...

You are so right - and so nicely put. Nature writes the poem. Great lines there, and atmosphere

Anonymous said...

What a lovely image... i may take my poem for a walk too! No sun here though so he'll need to take inspiration from grey skies and magpies!

Anonymous said...

Just gorgeous

Gillena Cox said...

really luv the first one

much love...