Friday, January 30

Sketch of life

the mist of time
seals away the chance of love
bedridden illness

feathered acrobatics
bare wisteria branches
goldcrest entertains




bright trumpet flowers
in a musty sickroom
rays of hope dashed



My haiku are based on the sentiment in those written by Masaoka Shiki, a modern haiku writer who died at the age of 35 in 1902.
He struggled with his health and was bedridden and housebound for most of his life. Hence his sadness at never having been given much of a chance to find love. Looking back on his short life, his later haiku express great sadness, bordering on despair.








Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I hadn't realised those biographical details about Shiki. I think your 'musty sickroom' and 'rays of hope' capture the feeling well.