Tuesday, January 6

mudpuddlers















butterflies grovel
finding salt on a sunday
colours belie

blue butterflies
dung beetles feed on cowpat
dainty and delicate

gradations of blue
oak ash dissolves in water
indigo dye

feathered acrobatics
bare wisteria branches
goldcrest entertains

born from a spark
we are the dust of the stars
the fire of the stars







Butterflies mudpuddling in the field, helping themselves to salt and other minerals. These butterflies, so dainty and delicate, behave like dungbeetles on a cowpat. Is this antithesis or juxtaposition?

Juxtaposition is just the adjacent placement of two (or more) dissimilar concepts. Antithesis is more specific — it’s the placement of two concepts that are not only dissimilar, but polar opposites. An antithesis is used when the writer employs two sentences of contrasting meanings in close proximity to one another. Whether they are words or phrases of the same sentence, an antithesis is used to create a stark contrast using two divergent elements that come together to create one uniform whole.

































Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

11 comments:

PirateGunn said...

Immensely likable page, very much enjoyed - am catching up on comments.

brudberg said...

Wonderful contrasts..

Birgitta Rudenius said...

Love this butterfly (have 4 as tattoos) Good haiku too

Gillena Cox said...

interesting info and great haiku ...

jazzytower said...

I see what you mean with the dissimilar with adjacent placement. And poor Michael, I have to Google him.

Unknown said...

What a pleasure visiting your blog...your poetry is stunning not to mention your photography...your explanation of this prompt is not only helpful but most interesting.

Adas Alcove said...


Good Contrasts. I like the blue butterflies and green dung beetles.

Reading Pleasure said...

Simply wonderful!

Bastet's Waka Library said...

Cool ... very interesting lesson in juxtaposition .. and lovely haiku examples! Brava.

Wolfsrosebud said...

nice throughout... enjoyed the 4th stanza the most

Chèvrefeuille said...

Gorgeous post Girl Friday