Amidst the planets and the stars
Shattered fragrance dances
As strings of crystals whirl around
Bright blue light enhances
The dark
Deep black but not stark
No sound
No sign of vapour trails
I'm going all the way to Mars
Exuberance prevails |
I tried to concoct the haiku out of my earlier poem, but didn't succeed.
deep black but not dark
strings of crystals whirl around
exuberance
floating on high
with the planets and the stars
shattered fragrance
great outburst of fun
people popping corks
throwing streamers
midwinter midnight
fire vying with the sun
outdoes the stars
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Written for a prompt at
CarpeDiem
3 comments:
Awesome post Girl Friday ... lovely poem and your haiku are beauties.
I love the poem... and taken out separately the haiku becomes like beads on a necklace..
Enjoy your interplanetary trip
Happy New Year !
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