absence of lightthe dark as concrete existencea definite presence
a vicious outburstof malicious energyhangs in the air
aggressive citiesplay the part of accomplicelike a dying fire
Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem
absence of lightthe dark as concrete existencea definite presence
a vicious outburstof malicious energyhangs in the air
aggressive citiesplay the part of accomplicelike a dying fire
5 comments:
What a nice condensation.. especially like the last one.
The second holds one to anticipate the unknown. Great beginnings of a very good plot GF!
Hank
"aggressive cities
play the part of accomplice"
is an intriguing image - it conjures up all sorts of possibilities.
Oh wonderfully done -- I can relate to that darkness that's so solid that it's almost a being in its own right -- and a malicious being, at that.
Brava!
WOW Girl Friday this is really great I don't know what to say ... this is a gorgeous post and I like that distilled haiku trio from the first poem ... thank you!
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