Saturday, May 9

whitest





a heart of gold
inside the purest white
nectar to die for










Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Saturday, April 25

...said the spider to the fly...




a mouthful of spiders
wren mama 's on her way
to feed her young

flying ants
huddle together
thorny place











Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Thursday, April 23

lotus seedpod





lotus seed pod
viable for 90 years
seeds rattle inside





Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Saturday, April 18

senses


.....kikobun with a soupçon of synesthesia












memory:
the power of an odour
it fills us up


Blindfolded I walk through the garden, absorbing the smells of the plants I know so well.
I turn right at the pungent touch of rosemary and sink to my knees by the salvia sage. Straight on for the sweet lingering scent of the yellow primula veris, the first pale yellow primroses to litter the ground with heavy tufts of their delight.

Past the pond with the musty odour of still water, the fresh fragrance of the Beauty Bush [ Kolkwitzia] leaves me in no doubt where in my garden I am. I need no compass to find my blind way to the wall, from where I overlook the acres of grassland I can see in my mind's eye. A mixture of last year's June hay with fresh new growth coming up in a myriad of greens.


containing depth
earth lets itself be inhaled
in one smell



The shrub called Flowering Currant [ Ribes] wafts its sour scent and beckons me on to the greenhouse, where the contained warmth of the sun intensifies each and every flower's fragrance: the very first rosebud of the intensely flavoured rose called Rosa "Arthur Bell" and the hothouse lily with a slightly overwhelming scent. The freesias which have no business being in flower before the end of April, and the musty smell of the pelargoniums: not nice but indicating the presence of their glorious pink flowers.
And not to be forgotten, this phlox divaricata, called "Clouds of Perfume" and giving language to the scent outdoing all others.

bittersweet
where it borders on taste,
more honeysweet
where you can feel it touching
the very first sounds of Spring















Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem


Friday, April 17

the wisdom of the cherry tree








offerings to the gods
dotting the slopes of mountains
saplings know the truth


cypress smoke
carries prayers to the gods
ascetic training

at their fleeting peak
trees awash with pink petals
Mount Yoshino knows best


Below the sport of double blossoms on our single flowered cherry tree.
Having said that, I reckon it was a double flowered tree to start with, which in part reverted back to singles.
It was planted before my time here. The tree must be at least 40 years old. These prunus trees are not long-lived. They wither away after about 40 years, and ours is definitely in the withering stage, sadly.











Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem



Thursday, April 16

breathless









breath - so precious
rumbles in my chest
may plum petals soothe




I picked up a chest infection since leaving the hospital last week.
yet another hurdle to jump.
beginning to feel sorry for myself
well, just a little :-)

My hand is still unsteady and the water colours look messy.
Still. Things can only get better.

My cherry blossom petals are snowing down steadily now, thanks to a flock of greedy goldfinches :-)
Couldn't hold the camera still yet.













Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Friday, April 10

I'M BACK!!!!

Three weeks in intensive care after an unexpected operation.

Wasn't supposed to survive it, but the surgeon took a chance on me and it came off.
Very emotional time, not least from the love that surrounded me those three weeks.
overwhelming and humbling.
I so hope I can prove that I deserved all this care and efficiency.
Tell you one thing: the NHS is simply terrific.

My brain is only just getting back into gear.
I shall need your cameraderie to help me through the aftermath. Learning to walk again and even type again is difficult.
Please be with me for this.
And thank you for the comments I found on my return, in the previous post.

Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Sunday, March 22

single branch













cherryblossom rain
leaves just the one hanging on
no more waiting
Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

stinky tree







ghostly flowers
see-thru petals drained of colour
abominable smell

I hold my nose
walking past the hamamelis
poor thing


Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Friday, March 20

larking about

It's that old crescent sun.....
...in the sky...[at least for a little while this morning.]

A lark is "sunshine translated into sound". Sadly this song of sunlight is being dimmed all over the country and may also end in a total eclipse.



hovering speck up high
with the lark's glorious trill
daytime nightingale


The solar eclipse was pretty spectacular in our area, against a rare blue march sky.It must have confused any skylark out there this morning.


Written for Jen at CarpeDiem

Wednesday, March 18

scales


Life is not all sweetness and light at the minute.
Today no pretty pictures or sweet little lines. Grim reality and unbelievable pain have caught up with me. Are haiku really fit vehicles for these kind of feelings? Hmm, not sure, but what the heck.


hostile sun - bright red
burns my eyes with fear ~
armies marching

or?


hostile moon, blood-red
burns my eyes with fear ~
armies on the march


There is a difference in my view between 'armies on the march' and 'armies marching'. The latter could be seen as merely exercising and flexing the muscles, as on May Day Parades; the former definitely means business. War business.

The 'blood-red moon' has biblical connotations and infers the second coming of Christ with an 'the end is nigh' feeling.

The bright red sun was something that happened to me yesterday, late in the afternoon, when it shone straight in my eye and scared the heck out of me.

Now for an afterthought on a different tack, this time mere irritation:

the cooing of pigeons
I want to wring their scrawny necks
flying rats

Aren't you glad you stopped by :-)

Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Monday, March 16

melancholy




from ignorance
crossing the river on a raft
to enlightenment

my mind goes back
to a summer now long past ~
tears fall unbidden

One from the archives:

“Is it because we know we are mortal
that we prize what’s ephemeral
beyond rubies?
Is it because we see the rose fade
that we furnish her dropped petals
with dignity?

How tenderly we cradle the dying
like Snowwhite in her glass cage
Not quite gone but going
as we know we ourselves are going
with or without the dignity
that Nature sometimes gifts”.

Sunday, March 15

too close to the wind




sails tied down for good ~
dinosaurs in the landscape
mere decoration

windmills flail around
sail too close to the wind
they don't sustain

they still grow grain, yet
arms wave in the wind in vain
just for show now
Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Saturday, March 14

shadows don't speak



A continuation of my celebration of Spring in our garden. Bits and pieces all over the place. Too many to mention. I'm on such a high and it has only just begun.


primroses/white heather/hellebore/kerria/scilla/doronicum/narcissus/forsythia/lenten rose/hyacinth/anemone blanda/drumstick primrose/flowering currant/



not a word spoken
all is deep silence
between us

the two of us -
does my shadow see me
the way I see her?

on quiet paths
thoughts touch eternity
then bounce back


each time I look
a flower in the face
it seems that
God is looking back at me:
petals are a holy place




Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem
also linked to a monthly prompt at Bloom Day










Thursday, March 12

soulangeana








naked branches
sport pink waxen flowers
till they drop brown

chinese saucers
soulangeana
partial shade

flowers drop soon
fat and fleshy like wax
a pain to pick up

frost turns buds brown
another flowerless year
far too much trouble

Magnolia soulangeana always strikes me as clumsy. I much prefer the daintier magnolia stellata [below].

It so happens that we have a huge M.soulangeana tree in our backgarden. Apparently the biggest in the county, with a preservation order on it. Pity. I would have had it out. It takes days to clean up after it, when the entire lawn is covered in its fat brown sticky aftermath. And one ends up with a very sore back as it has to be done by hand. A rake doesn't cut it.

And of course the slightest bit of frost turns the flowers brown even sooner; sometimes before the buds have fully opened, so you have a whole year without the supposed pleasure of this tree.

I haven't the patience and acceptance of Basho, who never saw his banana tree fruit, or even flower, as it was totally the wrong climate. I'll donate my magnolia tree to him posthumously :-)






Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Wednesday, March 11

umi oke



hint of true spring
almond blossom in full flow
warm azure sky


spring's first dawn
coloured by petals
newly opened

equinox
ice sloes start to move again
the sea opens up


Written for paloma at CarpeDiem

sound bites


the human race
industriously creating
its own downfall


the sea opens up
ice sloes start to move again
hint of true spring

umi oke

hint of true spring
ice sloes start to move again
the sea opens up






.........haiku..........

.........what it isn't ..........

conceptual philosophical
didactic pedantic

versus
.........what it is ..........

profound, universal and timeless
with a common thread throughout the world

"Haiku seeks to elucidate the inner truths by depicting the outside surface".

Does this mean: "Look at the wrapping and summise what's inside the parcel, but only if you want to?


In a way that would tie in with the concept of origami, which intially came forth out of the fancy wrapping techniques people used for gifts. Then the wrapping became more important than what was actually inside. A twisted view of things or mere presentation?

I can live with that, if being allowed to sneak in the odd poetic device and a conceit or two. (Shhhh, don't tell anyone.)

That leads me back to my haiku at the top.

the human race
industriously creating
its own downfall


Is it or isn't it?
I reckon it is conceptual and philosophical as well as universal and timeless and most certainly has a common thread throughout the world.

I suppose it doesn't live up to the ultimate criterium of having inner truth [ although clearly we now know that it has truth], and it certainly doesn't depict the outside surface.

Hmm, I wonder how I could get at the same truth by starting with the wrapping, almost as if I create an advertising campaign but you have to guess what it is I'm selling.

I could do with a bit of help here. Suggestions welcome.



Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Tuesday, March 10

first flowers









sketches of some of the little things springing up in the garden. Crocus, Iris reticulata, Jonquils.



spring's first dawn
coloured by petals
newly opened

refreshed
by first pick Earl Grey
spring treat

even in wartime
we watch flowers bloom
grasp at straws


Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Monday, March 9

ruffled feathers








It will become more like this when it gets older.


preening problems
Black Swan movie
ruffled feathers

baby bluetit
still too young to preen ~
are you asking me?



so much to learn
untidy feathers
juvenile

juvenile
untidy feathers
so much to learn

Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

water













silent trees and rocks
supporting cast to water
gushing down


the merest tremble
seen on the surface ~
but not heard


A waterfall pastel I did some years ago
and the lake in the garden next to us
representing both still and fast moving bodies of water.
Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Sunday, March 8

borrowed words




there is already enough out in the garden to make a window-sill-scape.

it takes a while
for pebbles on the beach
to turn to sand


I find karumi
in Zen detachment
from the daily grind


in the flap
of a butterfly’s wing
our life has gone

These haiku sort of floated out from prose written by Annette Makino
Take a look at her lovely post HERE


Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem





brushes


















paints call me
the feel of a brush in your hand
touching paper


the need to flee
embrace of the enchanter
illuminated vellum


reality flows
into a stream of pixels
handwashed



the need to flee
embrace of the enchanter
illuminated vellum

This pertains to the fact that I am disturbed by large quantities of flowers. I love them one or two at a time, but am intimidated, overcome even, by flowers on a large scale. They enchant, of course, by their sheer beauty and volume, but they overpower at the same time. So the flight from the enchanter becomes a necessity, and I pluck just one or two for close-up enjoyment. Then the next step is to tame them into paint on paper or failing the time for that, a photograph, my version of illuminated vellum, on a somewhat more modest scale :-) For me landscape and horticulture have been such a powerful influence. Overwhelming at times, but I would not have liked to live without them.




Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Saturday, March 7

raindrops



rainy day
~ no night for fireflies ~
tinged with silver light

Lots going on, poetically , inside these three lines, even though I was totally unaware of any of this when I composed it. Took me all of two minutes, and 'happened' while I was busy taking the photograph, outside, in a rainstorm. None of these phrases were used before in any of my poems. They just sort of 'came' and the three lines fell into place without fuss. It was only much later, after I had made the haiga, that I noticed the features. I know that traditional haiku are supposed to shun these devices, but what is one to do when they appear unbidden? Seeing that I have foresworn the classic haiku format, I was quite chuffed with what my tired brain had gifted me.

Assonance

is the repetition of vowel sounds to create internal rhyming within phrases or sentences

==
Alliteration
is the repeated sound of the first consonant in a series of multiple words

rainy day
~ no night for fireflies ~
tinged with silver light

assonance in:
rainy/day;
night/fire/flies/light;
tinged/with/silver/

alliteration in
no/night;
for/fire/flies;


full internal rhyme in:
night/light

















Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

viola riviana














viola riviana
close bosom friend of
primroses and phlox

wild violets
complement the cowslip
my soul dances for joy


why did the cow slip?
because she saw the bull rush
old chestnut


ne o tsukete / onago no yoku ya / sumire-so

women's desire
deeply rooted—
wild violets

Chiyo-ni

17th century



My gardener's heart has to point out that pansies are not wild violets but a horticultural hybrid, nor are African violets, which are a totally different species, known as saintpaulia.
Cowslip is Primula veris, the taller type of wild primrose, as in my picture. Primula vulgaris, below, lower to the ground, is the one found by waysides and in fields in large numbers at present. My garden is overrun with them, but they are very welcome.










Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Friday, March 6

red kite overhead




mealy-mouthed mewling
from fierce-looking raptor
red kite overhead

The red kite, a raptor like a buzzard, was near extinction about a decade ago. In the 16th and 17th century, ordinances went out in England to put them down whenever seen. These laws were relaxed a little over the years, but then farmers insisted that these birds took their young livestock and began exterminating them again.
Lately people have realized that they are not in the least harmful and their numbers are now increasing.
I love seeing them overhead and when there is a group of them, they dance on the thermals like a corps-de-ballet. There is a definite discrepancy between their awesome appearance and their faint whimpering cry.
Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

meadow





sacred outlook
in a meadowful of grass
sways an orchis




Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Thursday, March 5

puddled








shards of sky
litter the rainsoaked road -
double the blue





Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Wednesday, March 4

decay & after




a morning walk
so full of glorious moments
my mind is running over






brambles rear up
nose around in the air -
would-be suitors**



suitor

n.
1. A man who is courting a woman.
2. A person who makes a petition or request.
3. Law A person who sues in court; a plaintiff; a petitioner.
**4. A person or entity trying to acquire a controlling interest in a company, as by purchasing sufficient shares of its stock.

I wanted to indicate the invasive territorial nature of brambles, when they colonize an unkempt bit of garden or land.


jet overhead
its sound furls downwards
from a contrail of silk

scattering seeds
tubby little goldcrest
splatters the yew

sound of a Strad -
drops of water rolling over velvet
each clear note...





My depths are a bit shallow, but my soul is running over.
a.k.a. Never mind the quality: feel the width.
An unstoppable gush of words and images is suddenly set free.
I feel like a poet again after four months' being on the leash.

States Susumu Takiguchi:

"Initial exploration of HAIKU by non-Japanese was like gunmo taizo wo naderu (a lot of blind men feeling a great elephant) whereby one says that the elephant is a tree trunk and another says that it is a giant fan, and so on. The loud voices saying that HAIKU was Zen, or HAIKU was not poetry, or HAIKU was Here and Now, or HAIKU was the product of the HAIKU moment, or HAIKU was nature poetry, or HAIKU was a verse in present tense, or HAIKU was devoid of ego, or HAIKU was an extremely serious and sacred business, or HAIKU reached some mysterious and profound truths captured in a few words, or HAIKU was not anthropomorphism, and all other hundreds of things rang out across the world and muffled any other voices saying things to the contrary." (World Haiku Review, 2008)


Liberating, isn't it?
We've been cocooned in what hundreds of people have said over the centuries, about the haiku form and its restrictions. Time to make up our own mind. Set it free and let the thoughts and feelings roll, like notes from a Strad over soft velvet.
Let's celebrate the miracle that is the English language. Let's make our own three lined verses, honouring that language, which surely is the richest in the world. Let's walk side-by-side with the Japanese haiku, in mutual admiration, without slavishly copying what [we think] they are/were doing and do our own thing with our own spirit.

Written for CarpeDiem

Monday, March 2

light






within the dark -
the light of living
reveals a rose

in the light
and dark of living
white rose petals


Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Sunday, March 1

bamboo





between the pine
and the bamboo
I lost my way


Time is of the essence: panic stations as I had no bamboo photo in my archives. Outside, with the torch in one hand and the camera in the other, searching for a decent branch of pine. Bamboo grows about ten feet away from the pine tree, but leaves and needles in one frame do not make a good photo. So a bit of improvisation was needed to set up a tableau for a fitting photograph.



Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Saturday, February 28

happiness


a wild orchid
eclipses a daisy
any day

wafts its perfume
awaiting butterfly's
administrations

wild orchis
giving happiness a voice
on my knees


[Anacamptis pyramidalis
So rare, so precious
source of my happiness]

Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem

Friday, February 27

companions









on the sly
side by side they gobble leaves
from the edge inwards



in the still water
I see my stillborn twin
I live both our lives

Written for a prompt at CarpeDiem